Almost missed reading this post and I am so glad I didn’t. Beautifully written, love the poetry in the words and the flow. The twelve people may not have reached their destination but they showed the world what it means to not sit back in silence and let the little fires burn the entire forest.
Loved this, Pritam! Loved the free flow of words! As someone who plays an instrument, the musical metaphors struck a chord...the playing on different beats is so true...it creates its own kinda of discordant rhythm...and yet once in a while, everything falls in sync...for only a moment maybe...that's definitely a moment to work toward!
Little fires, big fires, silent forests crying in silence through the small, unseen fires...such deep metaphors for the world today...and the occasional typo too added to the general sense of cacophony as well as the silence that still exists, beneath the surface...beautifully written! Absolutely loved reading this!
There was a mad rhythm to this… discordant yet rhythmic. Loved it. And the little fires that are not so little :(
Thank you! And yes :( more and more shit
Almost missed reading this post and I am so glad I didn’t. Beautifully written, love the poetry in the words and the flow. The twelve people may not have reached their destination but they showed the world what it means to not sit back in silence and let the little fires burn the entire forest.
One hundred percent!
Loved this, Pritam! Loved the free flow of words! As someone who plays an instrument, the musical metaphors struck a chord...the playing on different beats is so true...it creates its own kinda of discordant rhythm...and yet once in a while, everything falls in sync...for only a moment maybe...that's definitely a moment to work toward!
Little fires, big fires, silent forests crying in silence through the small, unseen fires...such deep metaphors for the world today...and the occasional typo too added to the general sense of cacophony as well as the silence that still exists, beneath the surface...beautifully written! Absolutely loved reading this!
thank you for these kind words!
❤️🔥 stunning. Free Palestine
Good in general.
I have different views on the Gaza problem.
Maybe we can have a beer and talk some time 😀
Superb. The metaphors worked so well for me.
Thanks Ayush!!
FREE PALESTINE.
Everybody on the boat has been taken by the IDF :( May the force be with them!
Have so much to write.
Not only Gaza. It is happening across the world like your small fires for various reasons, fanaticism etc etc.
All these small or big fires are viewer’s perception concretised from they are looking at it.